I have this print in my apartment. It’s almost perfect, and better without the context of who Minus is. I’d want to remove the “probably”, then I’m happy.
That’s a good idea. The “probably” really is forced. Especially the second one.
I think the “punchline” works better if the serious tension isn’t broken early on.
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Disclaimer; it’s not okay to go around editing people’s comics to your liking. This time it’s okay, probably.
I have this print in my apartment. It’s almost perfect, and better without the context of who Minus is. I’d want to remove the “probably”, then I’m happy.
That’s a good idea. The “probably” really is forced. Especially the second one. I think the “punchline” works better if the serious tension isn’t broken early on.
Tap for spoiler